Thursday, March 16, 2017

blog post 11

el hotel elegante (partes 4-5)
all of a sudden the woman turned red and runs away. she is embarrassed and sad.she grabbed her suitcase. she did it very quickly and ran out the hotel, without saying goodbye Juan or the receptionist.she takes a uber and escapes in less than 3 minutes.

she arrives at the airport in Cancun, and checks her suitcases,she doesn't have her passport.its in her room she yells !oh my god! and starts to cry. she cries a lot. A employee of delta airlines says."i can help you miss" the woman stops crying and smiles. the employee verifies her license, no passport and no problem. she doesn't say thank you or gives a tip.

the woman receives her boarding pass.she left her suitcases and walks to the security.she takes out her license and starts to walk .but a security man says her license is expired. !oh my! she starts to cry and the man says don't cry please i can help you. the woman stops crying and smiles the employee calls the manager and there is no problem. she passes through security and she is happy. she doesn't say thank you or give a tip.

she sees the screen to look for her departure date,and buys a sandwich and a drink because she is hungry. all of a sudden after eating the sandwich she doesn't feel well.she runs to the bathroom but before she arrives she vomits in the middle of the hall.will all the passengers she is very embarrassed and turns red.she falls and starts crying when a employee arrives an says "its okay miss don't cry i can help" she sees a man and smiles she is happy. the employees clean up the vomit and the woman leaves doesn't say thank you and doesn't give a tip.

finally she arrives at the door b4 everyone is already boarding the plane and the woman boards also. she finds her seat and there is a man in a very elegant suit.he is tall and handsome.and the woman is very happy.she smiles blinks her eye and speaks.the two talk during the whole flight 2 hours and have a positive and good chemistry. they eat dinner and drink wine and laugh.but all of a sudden the man doesn't feel well. the man vomits on both of the seats including on the women.she is surprised starts crying. he vomits again and runs to the restroom.the flight attendant runs and says "i can help you miss". she brings towels and clean everything. the women doesn't say thank you and doesn't give a tip.
very soon the plane lands and everyone leaves.the woman thinks that the man is still in the bathroom and waits 5 minutes then she goes to the bathroom and knocks on the door.there was no response.she opens the door and is surprised. the man is not there the flight attendant says that the man didn't pay. thewomanered in vomit.no passport no license.she has to pay the bill for dinner and wine:$200. she starts to cry.

all of a suddenly i saw a little piece of paper in the bathroom.it is not toilet paper.it is a note it says"thank you for the food wine and conversation". now you can pay the price for being superficiant and dont forget to pay the tip.- Pablo" the woman starts to cry even more and the employees laugh at her.


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its okay miss don't cry i can help"
the woman leaves doesn't say thank you and doesn't give a tip.

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1 comment:

  1. Your blog is pretty. You translated the story correctly, the only thing I could recommend fixing are a few grammar mistakes.

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